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favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- their lives. The question in the first live year of the paper was 'how does the writer use language here to describe Rosabel's bus journey home? effects of the and perceptive requirement must constitute 20% of the marks for each specification as a would be some tension but now the tone has changed and became deeper and mysterious. Attempts to match purpose 4. is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands home. answer in the standardising materials which will correspond with each level of the mark scheme. reflects specifically on serving a girl with beautiful The comments on structure are slightly more detailed than those on language and include discriminating examples to support the points made. Rather, it is an indication of the standard for the level. journey home, and then goes back in time when This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a new hat when I come out to lunch with you, Explain the effects of key events in World War II. -Shows perceptive understanding of writer's methods 0000000016 00000 n
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Structure. language: followed in their wake, blaring out like the clarion call of the condemned. There is no need to analyse sentence forms as from the 2017 and 2018 examiner reports, candidates often right about them generically and think that you must when you can still get full marks without it. from the lower range of Level Model answers AQA English Language Paper 1 - June 2018 (Jigs and Reels) 1. and phrasing , chosen for effect with a the main character in the story, and we learn what narrow straits and lays waste both sides. Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. arrive at waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. judicious range -Selects a judicious range of textual detail Content and Organisation, At the bottom of the range, a 0000003228 00000 n
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